How Did These Blogs Meet My Learning Outcomes For Class?
LTED 618 Kerrigan Walters
Entry 13: Meeting Learning Outcomes with Blogs
Entry 12: Reflecting on the Genres Explored this Semester
Impact of Genres Explored This Semester
Extra Entry: Expanding On Poetry In My Classroom
A Low Amount of Poetry In My Classroom and What To Do About It
As a first year teacher in a grade level that I have never taught, observed or substitute taught in, I was very overwhelmed at the beginning of this school year. I was simultaneously learning what students at this grade were taught, how the school functioned, information about 4th grade state tests, what this age group did and didn't like and I was learning about my students and who they were as people. Let's just say that poetry was not a main focus of mine curriculum wise and I do feel sad about this. Now that I have a good understanding of many facets of fourth grade, the school, and my own teaching style, I feel as if I can start planning for the end of this school year and next year with more genres in mind, especially poetry. After reading the Tompkins chapter on poetry and being apart of the poetry genre expert presentation, I feel very excited to implement more poetry into my classroom.
To start, I was so thrilled with the poetry genre group's use of a poetry coffee house. I walked into the room and I felt relaxed, comfortable, and excited to sit in the author's chair. I loved the hanging lights, food, chairs in a circle, low lights, the signs, the microphone and the author's chair. This was immediately something that I thought I would love to include in my classroom. I thought about having one of these every two weeks and each time it would be slightly different of a title based on the genre we were studying in our writing workshop. I also loved the "I am" poems in the Tompkins chapter, I am planning on doing that at the start of every school year to learn about one another. I am also planning on doing this at the start of my guided reading groups to once again learn about one another. I included a picture of a template that I plan on using for the I am poems above. Another lesson I plan to implement is going outside and collecting objects and then crafting a poem about the objects. I was thinking that maybe the poem could be the 5 senses, a free verse poem, "If I were...." poems, or "I wish" poems. I was thinking that we could do multiple poems about the objects possibly and that students would be really engaged for this.
I also appreciated the poetry genre group for showing us a poetry generator that could be used to virtually create poems. I was thinking of making this a choice for after students finish their must do's during ELA or guided reading. I will also be doing a poetry unit, adding poetry to our writing workshop, reading poems for ELA, and reading poems for read aloud's. I think that poetry can intimidate many students, therefore starting the school year with simple poems about themselves and immersing them into poems in many ways, students will see that they don't have to feel intimidated. I am hoping that all of these ideas will show students how fun poetry can be and they will have meaningful experiences with it.
Entry 11: Using the Biographical Genre in my Classroom
How Can I Use the Biographical Genre in my Classroom?
After reading about the biographical genre in Tompkins (2012) and participating in the biographical genre presentation I was left wondering how I might personally use this genre in my own classroom. I know that the biographical genre is important to learn and know about and I also know that it can be very engaging to write about yourself or step into someone else's footsteps. I feel as though I did not do enough explicit teaching or exploring of this genre with my students this year. I want to change this for the end of this school year and for future years. One strategy for bringing this genre into the classroom that the presentation used was the "Me Quilt." I particularly enjoyed engaging in this with the mentor text that I brought to class. I believe that this is something that I will have my students do based on themselves and I thought since they will already know how to do it, that they could do a person we learn about as well. we learn about Native Americans, Colonists, and the American Revolution which all involve people that they could make a quilt about.
I was also thinking that during writing workshop I could have students write a personal narrative or an autobiography about themselves or their family. I think it would be important to explain the differences between a personal narrative and an autobiography. I would explain that a personal narrative is one experience and it explains how that event affected the writer. I would also tell my students that an autobiography spans a writers life usually and tells about the important events in their lives. I also like the idea of making a biography poster, and teaching students about what a biography is. I think it is important to teach them the difference between autobiography and biography because many students get the two confused. I would explain that a biography is about one person but written by someone else. I think the activities that I plan to use will help to facilitate the learning of these types of biographical writing. At the end of the school year, we do a poetry unit and I could see myself using the bio-poems to teach poetry and the biographical genre.
Lastly, I think that I could incorporate the biographical genre into my read aloud selections and mentor texts. I think it is important for my students to hear me talk about the genre through reading aloud and providing examples through mentor texts. While thinking about good mentor texts and books to read aloud, I think my mind is still thinking about the end of the presentation that focused on critical literacy. I liked how this part of the presentation made us question what biographical texts that we provide students with and what this teaches them. I think it is important to make sure that through our text selection that every voice is heard, diversity is present, and not every story is someone overcoming obstacles and succeeding. Students deserve to see ordinary biographies and autobiographies as well as people that did not overcome their obstacles or didn't have any obstacles. This is something that I will consider as I select texts for my classroom and I am appreciative that this was included in the presentation.
Entry 10: Bless, Address, or Press: Taylor W.
Bless, Address, or Press: Taylor W.
This week I am taking the time to speak about Taylor's ability to bring together Tompkins (2012) and the research she completed for her Genre Presentation. I was in awe of the way Taylor organized all that she learned about the persuasive genre and how she included new strategies in her post that added to my knowledge of the persuasive genre. I am always searching for new ways to teach and foster the topic that I am introducing students to, especially through technology. Taylor wonderfully laid out options to incorporate technology into the persuasive genre and your classroom. Taylor wrote about how her article she read for her genre presentation included strategies for persuasive writing like creating websites, blogs, or writing persuasive scripts for podcasts (Taylor W. Blog 9). These are all great tools to foster the importance of persuasive writing and reading while also highlighting how the persuasive genre is all around us. The image below really encompasses how I think about persuasion being all around us, especially in our technology heavy time.
My favorite part of Taylor's blog was the incorporation of the part about using online advertisements as a strategy to teach about persuasive writing and reading. I personally loved the activity that the group who presented on the persuasive genre (Taylor was one of them) included in their presentation. Therefore, Taylor's incorporation of this in her blog gained my attention and after reading it, I feel that this is a strategy that I hope to use in my classroom. I liked how Taylor included all of the 3 types of persuasion, audience, purpose, and websites to create the advertisements that students make. This lesson that Taylor outlined in her blog makes me envision myself completing something similar. One thing that I would consider doing a little bit differently, is talking about propaganda and its affect on c consumers. I would also consider starting this exploration of advertisements with printed ones first and then work up to online advertisements. I would also personally give my students the choice of making their own advertisement on a website like google slides, Canva or Jamboard and also giving them the choice to make it on construction paper. Lastly, I liked how the students in her activity would look at googles terms and conditions of advertising and talk about persuading through this. I would also have printed advertisements and we would watch commercials and through all three sources, we would create a list of the items that make good advertisements because of the 3 types of persuasion. Overall, Taylor did a fantastic job with not just this post, but all of her posts. I really liked how I could read her posts and then think about how I might use elements of what she talked about in my own classroom. Thank you Taylor!
Entry 9: Propaganda Vs. Persuasion
What is the difference between propaganda and persuasion?
After reading Chapter 11 on Persuasive Writing, I am still left with a question. Tomkins (2012) wrote that "propaganda isn't the same as persuasion; the word propaganda suggests something shady or underhanded" (p. 253). I am still confused about what the difference is between propaganda and persuasion. I am not sure how I would explain this to my students and I don't know how to explain it to myself. I feel like I can notice that they are different but I can't put into words how the two are different. I decided that after reading about this topic in Tompkins (2012), I needed to do some additional research. In my research on the difference between propaganda and persuasion, I came across a website that a psychologist made that really supported my understanding. In the article that author wrote that "propaganda is a form of careful, organized communication with the intent of the communicator, called a propagandist, to influence a person or group of persons to think or behave differently or to reinforce pre-existing thoughts or behaviors" (Brown, 2020). The author also explained persuasion well when she wrote "persuasion is a form of communication also meant to influence a person or group to change their minds, behaviors or attitudes, or just to consider a different view point" (Brown, 2020). I think this article really helped me understand that most of the time with propaganda, the propagandist is the one that benefits and only sometimes does the consumer. I see how propaganda is more negative and persuasion is usually not as negative. I also liked learning about how in propaganda information is controlled by the propagandist and in persuasion it flows freely between the persuader and the persuade.
I also learned about the three types of propaganda (black, gray, and white) and reinforced my knowledge of the 3 types of persuasion (ethos, pathos and logos). With propaganda there is often concealing of information, not including information, or the information is fabricated (Brown, 2020). This makes me understand why Tompkins (2012) wrote that "propagandists often use underhanded techniques to distort, conceal, and exaggerate the facts" (p. 253). I now have more background knowledge about this topic so when reading Tompkins I can see the connections and I understand the material more clearly. The examples, images and the chart below really helped to aid my understanding of these two concepts. Based on my reading in Tompkins and of Brown's article, I see why this topic is important to teach to students. I see how students need to be informed of the similarities and differences between propaganda and persuasion. I see how students need to be shown examples of each, how certain words are used in propaganda to trick you and how information can be kept from consumers.
Tompkins, G. E. (2012).
Teaching writing: Balancing process and product (6th
ed.). Upper
Saddle
River, NJ: Merrill.
Entry 8: "Bless, Address, or Press"
This week I would like to highlight my classmate Maddison Moore's blog. In Madison's Blog 5, she was posing questions related to the writing process and the finished product in the publish phase. Maddie wrote that "sometimes I forget that writing is a process and a piece does not have to be completely perfect on the first try" (Maddison, Blog 5). I appreciate how sincere and open she was about this because I also find myself trying to make it perfect right from the beginning. Maddie then went on to pose a fantastic question that has left me pondering for awhile now. She wrote "is there such thing as a perfect writing piece? Isn't there always room to improve?" (Maddison, Blog 5). I think that students often become frustrated by writing due to this element of "perfection" and the process is not one piece and done like many students would like. I like that Maddison is focused on the process more than the product just like this class has taught us. I would answer Maddison's question about a piece ever being perfect with no. I personally think that writing can always be improved and revised or edited and there is always more to say about a topic. I would also like to say that Kucer (2014) would most likely agree with me because he states that "readers and writers act as scientists and construction workers as they build an ever evolving understanding of literacies. Becoming literate rather than being literate more accurately describes our ongoing relationship with written language" (p. 7).
"Personally, I think educators (myself included) should go beyond an aware winning 'stamp of approval' and think critically about the texts we choose as mentor texts" (Maddison, Blog 7). This line made me reconsider my selection choice of mentor texts for the future. I have always looked for the award winning stamp and picked the book off of the shelf. I know realize that I should be more critical of the book, the author, the message, and what I am teaching before selecting a mentor text. I appreciate Maddison for writing this line and allowing me to take a step back and consider my own mentor text selection process. I really appreciate Maddie for questioning if a text is an award winner does it mean it is still best for all students? I would like to consider this question myself and maybe I don't have all of the answers but I think it is an important question to consider. I would say that as an educator you should know your students, your content and use that information when selecting a mentor text. I would say that not every book that has an award winning stamp should be the perfect mentor text for you and your class. I think many books are great mentor texts if they are used in a way that supports students and pushes their knowledge of the content and society.
Thank you Maddie for posing these questions and for having very detailed and elaborate blog posts. If anyone wants to look for more great information, here is her two blog posts that stood out the most to me: Blog 5 and Blog 7.
Kucer,
S. B. (2014). Dimensions of literacy: A conceptual base for teaching reading and
writing in
school settings (4th
ed.). Mahwah, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.
Entry 7: Visualizing Worlds from Words on a Page
"Children who are avid readers co-research the processes central to their engagement as readers in creating, entering, and sustaining a story world" (Parsons, 2006, p. 492).
This week I will be talking about my Genre Presentation article that I read. The article was titled Visualizing Worlds from Words on a Page by Linda Parsons. This article was mostly about how children create a story world in their mind while they read. This article also mentioned strategies that children engage in while reading. The six themes or strategies that the children used while reading were connecting to characters, being in the book, experiencing emotions and physical reactions, wondering and predicting and visualizing. This article urged teachers to focus on the aesthetic stance versus the comprehension focus. The aesthetic stance focuses on the experience of reading, and the feelings, sensations and images that come to children while reading. Parsons and the co-researchers, who were the children, found that the aesthetic stance actually led to higher comprehension and interest in reading. One of the more prominent strategies or themes that came from this article is visualizing as you read. Descriptive language that authors and classmates writing includes will support children while they are reading to create stories in their minds.
This article has helped me in my classroom because the mindset of this article was to create lifelong readers and this is something that I feel strongly about doing. I think it is important to not just make sure that students understand what they are reading but also that they are enjoying what they are reading. This article also gave me some mini lesson ideas that can focus on visualization, connecting to characters, imagining yourself in the book, emotions and feelings about the book, and wondering and predicting while reading. I also gained knowledge about fostering hypothesizing and extending children's knowledge. I also gained more evidence as to why providing students choice in their books is important. I also liked reading about how teachers should also give students choice in their form of response. Now in my guided reading groups, I have been giving students 2 or 3 choices to respond to the book. I also have been using this knowledge in my writing workshop because I have been teaching students to write as if they are creating a story or write as if the reader can picture it in their head. I appreciated learning about how to teach children the way and reasons to read, not simply the way. I also appreciated how children were viewed as active engagers in the reading while they create, enter, and sustain the story world.
Parsons, Linda T. 2006. Visualizing Worlds From Words On a Page. Language Arts;
Urbana, 83(6), 492-500.
Entry 6: A Letter to Dr. Jones
Dear Dr. Jones,
This letter is to provide you with feedback regarding the first half of the semester in LTED 618. Overall, I believe that the class is going fantastic and I am learning a lot about the connection between reading and writing so far. I think this class is what I expected, and I am not very surprised at how I've been asked to engage in learning or by what I am learning. I am pleasantly surprised by the blogs though and it has been one of my favorite ways to express what I have learned in any college class. There are a few instructional strategies or learning activities that I plan on using in the future after learning about them in this class. The first activity is the Card Strategy for brainstorming topics and organization during the writing process. I enjoyed that activity and I could imagine my students enjoying it as well. Second, I plan on using the listing attributes strategy that Tompkins mentions and the Double Journal Entry Strategy. Third, I would like to use either personal journal writing or blogging in my classroom in the future. I also really enjoyed learning more about think alouds, interactive writing and interactive read alouds, process assessment and five-senses clusters. I plan on using all of these activities or strategies during my future teaching and I have really enjoyed learning how to create an effective writing workshop which I am passionate about.
I think that the blogs, freewriting, brainstorming activities, and the genre pieces project have positively influenced me as a reader and a writer. I believe that the writing activities in this class have influenced my writing knowledge and fluency. I also believe that the reading activities in this class have increased my knowledge of the connections between reading and writing and have increased my reading fluency. Also, learning new mentor texts in each genre have increased my knowledge and depth of reading possibilities for students. I am not sure if I have any struggles pertaining to this class but I suppose that I have to read the directions for assignments multiple times. I often get the assignments mixed up because the names are very similar. I think I will feel better about the genre presentation after I meet with you this Tuesday. I would like a little more clarification on the genre pieces project though. Other than that, I am loving the class because I have always loved writing and the writing process.
Sincerely,
Kerrigan Walters
Entry 5: The Card Strategy
Following the card strategy lesson from class, that modeled the card strategy from Kucer and Rhodes (1986), it made me reflect on my previous brainstorming. In class we were provided with 20 index cards and we wrote one word on each card relating to our topic of interest. We then picked 7-11 that fit together well for our first piece. We ordered them based on how we might organized our piece and then numbered them 1-7. We then got with a partner and traded sets of index cards, which we ordered how we might order it if it was our topic without looking at the numbers. Then we explained our thinking of why we were arranging them how we were. After this was done the original person explained why they numbered them how they did. My previous brainstorming has been a little bit similar but mainly different from this strategy that we learned about. My previous brainstorming had been creating a word bubble cluster, freewriting about the topic and talking with peers about how to go about writing this piece. I would also make an outline of the project and write ideas under each section of the outline.
Based on the cognitive strategies and metacognitive strategies in Chapter 2 of Tompkins I used a couple of them while using the card strategy. I used narrowing, organizing, goal setting, elaborating, and generating. I used narrowing when I selected the 7-11 cards, organizing when I grouped my ideas and sequenced them into order, and goal setting when I thought about my pieces end goal and who my audience was. I used elaborating when I came up with my words and explained them to my partner and during freewriting after and I used generating when I came up with my words for each card, my overall idea and then my idea for the 7-11 cards and when I talked to my partner. I plan on using the card strategy for when I do the next two pieces of this project and when writing other assignments in the future. I think it helped to talk with a partner and have a partner organize my thoughts and explain why they would order the topics in a certain way. It was helpful to see the big picture of all of the cards and then narrow them down for the one piece of the project.
Kucer, S. B. & Rhodes, L. K. (1986). Counterpart strategies: Fine tuning language with
language. The Reading Teacher, 40(2),186-193.
Entry 4: Writing and Reading
This week I am going to talk to you about how reading and writing are similar in many ways. Before I read Tierney and Pearson (1983) I didn't really view reading and writing as similar processes. Tierney and Person (1983) start their article by saying that "reading and writing are essentially similar processes of meaning construction. Both are acts of composing" (p. 568). It is now clear to me that while reading and while writing you are focused on the meaning of the information and on creating meaning. I now am able to see that people use very similar processes to read and to write. One factor that is extremely important is background knowledge while reading or writing. The reading or writing process will look different based on the level of background knowledge a person has on the subject being read or written about. Readers and writers both plan before reading or writing, readers might get mentally ready to read, get a highlighter or paper to take notes on and a writer gathers ideas, gets out materials or does research. Both are also setting goals and objectives for themselves during planning.
Readers and writers also both draft in which a reader might start thinking about the ideas in the text after the first read and the writer might get all of their ideas onto the page. I also liked learned about alignment in which the reader or writer take a stance, this is something I did not think about. Next, while revising, the reader and writer reflect about the information, critique, and analyze the material before them. Finally, I also liked how the authors mentioned monitoring in the article because it helped me understand this concept. Monitoring is evaluating what the reader read and the writer wrote. I liked this article because it helped me see how parallel reading and writing actually are. I never made this connection before reading this for class and I am glad that I have.
Tierney, R. &
Pearson, P. D. (1983). Toward a
composing model of reading. Language Arts,
60(5),
568-580.
Entry 13: Meeting Learning Outcomes with Blogs
How Did These Blogs Meet My Learning Outcomes For Class? There are many reasons that the blogs I made this semester supported my learning ...
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How Can I Use the Biographical Genre in my Classroom? After reading about the biographical genre in Tompkins (2012) and participating...
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In my analysis of the reading and writing processes so nicely explained in Tompkins and Tierney & Pearson, I now see my own proces...